Sunday, September 18, 2011

Face Off


In my World Literature class we were required to present some "Creative Writing" to the class. I didn't really know what they meant so, this is what I ended up presenting.

This was written in about half an hour in the time between getting home from Seminary and when the class I needed it for started. Therefore it received minimal editing.

Face Off
Eli Gardner, created 9-14-2011

Where did he go?
You would think that an assassin would not be thinking this to himself but.
I'd been on his trail for almost a week. I was catching up. The magic aura signature was becoming more and more fresh every hour. And now this?
The signature had disappeared, completely. There was no trace of him teleporting or magically concealing himself. He just, disappeared off of all magical radar.
Nim had not given up yet because this was his assignment. Sure it was all political, corrupted and probably misconceived but, it was his job. This was the way he stayed alive. He didn't get paid with this magician still alive. He had to at least look like he tried until there was no possible way of completing his assignment.
Nim was actually on the right track. He had found and followed the target and was actually very close to him as he despaired over his supposed defeat.
The man's name was Zutrice. He was a magician. A very powerful one. He was an elemental warlock who specified in the art of fire. He was an arch-mage for one of the empires more capitalistic kingdoms. Handling the mystic aspect of that kingdom's affairs. He was on some kind of political mission which is of no particular importance to our story except that it placed him in a more conspicuous location than is typically allowed for a high ranking citizen.
Zutrice was a political target. His assassination would probably stir up some massive war or make somebody slip into a more powerful position in some seemingly unrelated government agency. In other words. His death was of no real value except as a political weapon.
The arch-mage was creative and powerful. He knew Nim was stalking him. So, he had cast a cloud of magical confusion making Nim unable to detect him if he got close enough. Apparently, it worked. Nim got within a stones throw of the arch-mage and then stopped.
Now Zutrice was looking at him through the window of an inn. Nim the assassin. Tall, of course, with a long cloak to hide all his tricks, traps and weapons.
He is going to try and kill me. This government hit man? Pitiful.
Zutrice conjured a large ball of fire, compressed it into a bolt, wound up for the shot and –
Fell over dead.
Nim suddenly felt magic rushing at him from an inn on the other side of the square.
Under attack? Quick! Defend!
But the wave of Zurtrice's magic from his death simply swept over him, telling him his target was.... dead?
Nim found the arch-mage's body on the floor of the inn. He had a hole through his forehead from.... looked like a .50 cal.
Sniper! Probably still here! Oh no! Cover! Gotta get under cover!
Nim fell over the arch-mage's body; dead.

Don't you love politics?

Saturday, August 21, 2010

Jana is Gone!

Jana has always been amazing on the flute. It got her into early college at Weber State University when she was like, 16. And then she got a HUGE scholarship to CU Boulder earlier this year. I guess that we all knew it was coming but, now that she's actually gone and is only going to be back for holidays and stuff, it's still really strange to have a smaller family home and Jana not being here.

Jana is gone and Josh is going into the Missionary Training Center (MTC) next Wednesday. Everybody is leaving!

Oh well, I guess that I'm really happy about what they're doing. It's pretty awesome.

Wednesday, August 11, 2010

The New School Year

Well, the new school year is just about here. I'm going to be turning 16, going to my 3rd year of Seminary, hopefully finishing my Eagle really soon, going through driver's ed so I can et my license, taking the TJYC class, and hoping not to die from being overwhelmed.

That looks like a really scary list of things to do in the next few months to me :S

And all of that is not to mention that Josh and Jana are both going to be gone within 2 weeks of today. Josh on his mission in Toronto Canada, and Jana at CU Boulder for her flute.

I'm not whining, I'm just a bit nervous and... um... I don't know. It's all going to be so fun!

Eli

Sunday, February 22, 2009

It's Been A Long Time

Gosh,
I really didn't mean for there to be a big gap here but, I sort of forgot about this. Sorry.
Anyway, I'm a bit busy right now so, I'll try to remember to do this a bit more now.
That's all for now. Bye.

Sunday, November 30, 2008

EJ 18 All I Want for Christmas

All I Want for Christmas

11-30-08

I already have my two front teeth. So I guess I am going to have to find some other things I want. Hmmm.

I like BYU, a lot of other people like it too but I like the Cougars. So I have been wanting some stuff with the blue and white on it for a bit now. Like a BYU football and hoody. But BYU isn't the only thing I want. I also like good movies, and here are a few that I would like: Transformers, The Matrix Trilogy (edited of course), The Bee Movie, and Wall-E.

I would also really like the Risk II computer game, that would be fun. Well that is about it off the top of my head. Other than any good fun surprises that you think up.

That's all. Eli

Thursday, November 20, 2008

J 17 Ranks

Ranks

11-20-08

there are five classes in Polar Star this year: first in the morning is Writing Class taught by Sister Meeks and my mom, and after that is Science Class provided by Sister Huntsman, then after lunch comes Shakespeare oversaw by Sister Hampton, and then the last set of classes is Key of Liberty by Sister Musellman and Sister Scherbal (first term) and at the same time Sword of Freedom taught by Sister Taylor and assited by Sister Meyers(second term).

I'm taking all the classes (except Key of Liberty, which I already took last year) and the one that I want to talk about right now is Sword of Freedom.

Now
Sword of Freedom class is about the Civil War. And as you complete the different requirments you earn ranks, which are signified by silver and gold stars that you put on your kepi (Civil War hat). Right now I'm just the third rank of First Leutenant, that's six ranks away from the top rank of Leutenant General. And get this (yes this is due from all my procrastinating), I have till the end of class monday to get all those past off.

Now don't worry, I've got it under control. So far this week I've already earned four of those six ranks. that means that I only have two to go. And they're just finishing up memorizing some things.

No worries.

Eli

J 16 Catching Up

Catching Up

11-20-08

Well. I haven't been turning in my assignments for Polar Star as promptly as I should for the last few weeks. But who doesn't miss a month here or there? Well that's what I'm doing this for, I'm trying to get back on track the last few weeks so that I still get credit. And so far, it's actually looking up a bit.

Not like I got all the stuff done in a day, but. Well, it's getting to that point. I figure that if I stick to the schedule and don't mess around and play computer games when I should be studying. I'll be perfectly fine, well not perfectly, its not like I like being swamped by homework and staying in the house all day.

Anyway, this little writing here is helpping my in and of itself. So I'm not bad off after all.

Eli